"I left my wife
and 49 kids
on the verge of starvation
without any gingerbread left
left, left, right left."
Remember that one?
Thanks to my recurring reluctance to repeat a word in a poem, unless it's really intentional in a them kind of way, I am today trying to find another word for "left" (in the wife and gingerbread sense).
Preferably also monosyllabic. "Abandoned" feels a little too long and too strong.
I have several hours left.
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Sunday, November 9, 2008
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